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Post by Vice on Feb 18, 2006 21:38:14 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]Sup people! Ive been working with a new MC today called R.E.P. This is the first track he has ever recorded and I was just wondering what y'all though. I did the beat and jump on the second verse, but hola back to let me know what you think of my protege! lol
peace
jus click the link -
"http://www.soundclick.com/pro/default.cfm?bandid=460579&content=music">Vice
ps, please can sum1 leave a message on my forum cos its looking worse than whack! i'll love you long time!!!
And also if y'all have any feedback on any of my music please let me know. Because I'd love to hear what people are feeling,
thanks
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http://www.v-i-c-e-.com[/glow]
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Post by samm on Feb 18, 2006 22:00:41 GMT -5
yo i just checked this, and i gotta say it was pretty disappointing. Your flow is very lazy and theres nothing really distinctive about what you say. Theres not much passion or soul in your voice and the track barely keeps going because of it. Maybe if you had a more distinctive voice it would come off better. Please don't take this criticism the wrong way, but i think you need to work a lot harder at your game.
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Post by Nifty on Feb 19, 2006 4:30:53 GMT -5
Nice track mate- real laid back- pretty damn good for his first ever track. Good work.
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Post by Nifty on Feb 19, 2006 4:31:30 GMT -5
Oh yeah the link to your site aint workin...  |
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Post by Solocypher on Feb 19, 2006 8:32:29 GMT -5
Yo the tracks not too bad, ya boy Reps done good for a first ever spit but id have to agree with Samm about the lack of emotion...needs a bit more feeling, otherwise pretty sound, drums could be pumped up a bit more as well, feelin the Brum accent comin thru! word
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Post by Vice on Feb 21, 2006 19:01:25 GMT -5
nifty - cheers geez, i appreciate the compliments and i'll pass on your comments. Cheers for lettin me know bout the link, is it the one to my website or to soundclick? solo - props bruv, we still need to hook up again? wahgahwahn? I agree with the drums, they seem to lack on the mixdown, think i'll go back to the session and try and clean them up to sound bigger and crisper. Thanks for da comment on the brum accent man/ Sam, please cut REP some slack, its his first ever recorded verse, personally i think he did damn well, hes not perfect but hes got so much potential, just think how it was when you started. But I do see your point, but i think that was lack confidence that made his voice run flat. As i said, REP does the first verse and i do the second, im tryna teach him track structure and bars. Peace tho man. PS, im doing a session at the boiler room tomorrow! 5 track set - 10pm, 22/2/06 if anyone can come along thatd be great peace all one Vice .......................... www.v-i-c-e.com |
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Post by samm on Feb 22, 2006 11:14:19 GMT -5
please, my criticism is only meant to be constructive...and if you post something on a public forum, you should expect it. At least i didn't say 'you're abstract bollocks made me want to kill myself' or something like that...
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Post by vice on Feb 22, 2006 20:12:09 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]dude relax,
i appreciate the criticism.
im jus tryna back up my artist as i know he found that track hard to do.
one love man and please take what i said the wrong way,
peace
vice[/glow]
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Post by vice on Feb 22, 2006 20:13:43 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]i meant please DONT take what i sed the wrong way,
peace,
vice[/glow]
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